Dasimoge 69 Posted January 6, 2019 (edited) Design picture I know the colors i took ain't fit at all. Edit Notes: -Changed title -Changed design style -Concept for a Little Orbit launcher Status: Stopped atm due to irl stuff. ( Skilled worker examination Part 1 soon ) Greetings, Dasimoge Edited January 30, 2019 by Dasimoge 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WhiskeyTangoFoxX 280 Posted January 6, 2019 Gonna be blunt, but it looks pretty bad. If you've only designed it for 2 hours you really shouldn't post it yet. The status texts are hard to read, download bar is hard to read, you have a whole bunch of dead space, the Han sever doesn't exist anymore, you lost the news panel, the 3 buttons in the middle seem randomly placed. Personally I think the launcher is pretty much fine as it is, if anything I'd make it larger with a readable patchnote window and keep everything else mostly the same. 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheJellyGoo 343 Posted January 6, 2019 You have no deadline here!? Don't publish a version you're not even convinced of by yourself - criticizing it from the get go. A lot of negativity for a presentation. Start strong and confident the criticism will come by itself. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SpuzvaBob 92 Posted January 6, 2019 Moved thread to correct section. -Spuzva Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dasimoge 69 Posted January 6, 2019 1 hour ago, WhiskeyTangoFoxX said: Gonna be blunt, but it looks pretty bad. If you've only designed it for 2 hours you really shouldn't post it yet. The status texts are hard to read, download bar is hard to read, you have a whole bunch of dead space, the Han sever doesn't exist anymore, you lost the news panel, the 3 buttons in the middle seem randomly placed. Personally I think the launcher is pretty much fine as it is, if anything I'd make it larger with a readable patchnote window and keep everything else mostly the same. I've posted it due to see what peoples would like to have on the launcher. Obviously as well to collect opinions to make it better. Though no i've not lost the news panel, i just didn't added it yet. I'm thinking about to make my launcher concept as a HTML version, so you would be able to test the panels. If ur a good designer, i don't mind sending you the PSD file. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LilyRain 674 Posted January 6, 2019 @Dasimoge The following is what I could think of on the spot, see if it works well with your plans for the design: 1 » This is not critical but it would be nice if the launcher would show the currently selected region. 2 » Perhaps "Advanced Settings" should be inside "Settings", so Advanced Settings shouldn't be an option in the main screen. 3 » Move the "Repair" button to where the "Advanced Settings" button was (this is my opinion/preference, but currently the Repair-button is in the spotlight next to region and start buttons. Repair should NOT be in the center with these two. This step should fix that as well as the cavity left by step 2). 4 » Looking at "Remaining: 0mb", "mb" should be in uppercase letters (MB). Also add a space key-stroke before it (don't let the number hug the letters). 5 » The in-game currency is still G1C (plus websites), so there is a chance Gamersfirst's Logo should be included in the Launcher, but I am not sure. 6 » I personally don't mind this, but having buttons stand out from the background would also be nice. 1 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dasimoge 69 Posted January 6, 2019 3 minutes ago, Lily Rain said: @Dasimoge The following is what I could think of on the spot, see if it works well with your plans for the design: 1 » This is not critical but it would be nice if the launcher would show the currently selected region. 2 » Perhaps "Advanced Settings" should be inside "Settings", so Advanced Settings shouldn't be an option in the main screen. 3 » Move the "Repair" button to where the "Advanced Settings" button was (this is my opinion/preference, but currently the Repair-button is in the spotlight next to region and start buttons. Repair should NOT be in the center with these two. This step should fix that as well as the cavity left by step 2). 4 » Looking at "Remaining: 0mb", "mb" should be in uppercase letters (MB). Also add a space key-stroke before it (don't let the number hug the letters). 5 » The in-game currency is still G1C (plus websites), so there is a chance Gamersfirst's Logo should be included in the Launcher, but I am not sure. 6 » I personally don't mind this, but having buttons stand out from the background would also be nice. That's what i want to hear! 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LilyRain 674 Posted January 6, 2019 1 minute ago, Dasimoge said: That's what i want to hear! You're welcome~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Szambi 85 Posted January 6, 2019 It looks like it was made for phones. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_chain 176 Posted January 6, 2019 Ahh, looks way better. GJ. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WhiskeyTangoFoxX 280 Posted January 6, 2019 The new draft is a lot better, good work. I think a different font is in order for the news and stuff, but other than that I think it's looking pretty good now 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dasimoge 69 Posted January 6, 2019 5 minutes ago, WhiskeyTangoFoxX said: The new draft is a lot better, good work. I think a different font is in order for the news and stuff, but other than that I think it's looking pretty good now Which font would you prefer? Btw i thought about, to replace "Screenshots" mabye with "Twitch Highlights".. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WhiskeyTangoFoxX 280 Posted January 6, 2019 21 minutes ago, Dasimoge said: Which font would you prefer? Btw i thought about, to replace "Screenshots" mabye with "Twitch Highlights".. I would personally go with a non-bold or at least a less bold font for the text. Having it with the same weight as the title feels strange to me. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dasimoge 69 Posted January 6, 2019 @WhiskeyTangoFoxX such this? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WhiskeyTangoFoxX 280 Posted January 6, 2019 much better! (also heads up of the misspelling of "Complete") Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dasimoge 69 Posted January 6, 2019 (edited) 17 minutes ago, WhiskeyTangoFoxX said: much better! (also heads up of the misspelling of "Complete") Oh ups haha! //Picture updated Edited January 6, 2019 by Dasimoge Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NotZombieBiscuit 3146 Posted January 7, 2019 This is worse in every way. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dasimoge 69 Posted January 8, 2019 16 hours ago, NotZombieBiscuit said: This is worse in every way. Make it better 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cuve 244 Posted February 7, 2019 Use a different font than the fat one and please... please don't stretch pictures... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cuve 244 Posted February 8, 2019 (edited) Gave it a shot with 30 minutes... It doesn't have all the features yours has but you know... It's coming from an already existing game launcher of another game you may find out yourself Edited February 8, 2019 by Xue 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bruised 114 Posted February 8, 2019 I see what you did there, using the font people used to select to make memes back in 2012. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Posted February 8, 2019 looks very cool! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_chain 176 Posted February 8, 2019 17 hours ago, Cuve said: Gave it a shot with 30 minutes... It doesn't have all the features yours has but you know... It's coming from an already existing game launcher of another game you may find out yourself Thats fucking cleeeeean. Nice LoL launcher vibe to it. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thesamscout24 14 Posted February 9, 2019 This looks brilliant! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
