Hello fellow members of the community,
I've been writing a few stories into notepads, and such over the years, playing APB, and have taken it upon myself to develop a story fully from the game. I want to be able to get feedback, and suggestions, as well as maybe some characters to enter into the story.
So far, I've really only written two short chapters, with really not a foreseeable ending, or arcing, I'm just writing what comes to mind. Kind of like how some 4-koma manga can be written. I'd really enjoy it if there's positive, (or even negative feedback to help better my writings) to know how I'm doing, and to know if I should keep it up.
I have also only been writing this as a hobby, in my lack of decent free time (I'm basically doing this during, and in-between classes)
Hopefully I can also be corrected of any misconceptions from cannon-APB content. (Note, I don't want to try to explain somethings to outsiders who haven't played APB, like my girlfriend, so I use some realistic content as well, i.e. the Nissan in the story.)
Thanks to you all!